Thursday, January 21, 2010

Storys That Are A Great Read On Fan Fiction.Net

So Once a Week I will look through Fan Fiction and find a Fic that is really good and post a chapter. Then tell you readers to go read it, and maybe give the writer some feedback. Now the first one is going to be a story about One tree hill. It is Called TUG OF WAR and is by Haley Elizabeth James.
I really enjoyed reading this story and see a lot of potential in it, so with out any further questions. I really think this is a story for people to read, its very well written


I Do Not Own Any of the Lovely One Tree Hill Characters

Who Is She?

Song: Youth Games- The Mission District


Haley came out of the Tutor center so upset with her big sister Taylor. Taylor was supposed to pick Haley up after school. But yet again, Taylor had found some dumb guy who fell for Taylor’s stupid mind games. Taylor had texted Haley saying

I met a guy, gone home early. Have a nice walk Loser”

Haley was so utterly pissed off. It was pouring rain, and thanks to Taylor she would have to walk home without a jacket. Just then a car drove by and splashed Haley. The car quickly backed up. The window opened, it was Lucas. Haley was relieved.

“Luke, next time you want to not splash me?” Haley said

“I could just let you walk?” Lucas said

Haley and Lucas had been friends for as long as they could remember.

“No, Luke Please?” Haley said still standing outside in the rain

“You know Hales I would never let you walk home in the rain, get in” Lucas said. Haley got in

“Thank you, I love you like a Brother Lucas Eugene Scott” Haley said

“I love you like a sister, Haley James” Lucas said

“So are you going to tell me why you were walking? Wasn’t Taylor supposed to driving you home?” Lucas asked.

“Well you know Taylor, she left with so guy. So that’s why I was walking” Haley explained

“Hales you should of called me” Lucas said

“I didn’t want to bother you besides, you’re supposed to be at Basketball” Haley said

“Whitey canceled practice, he had a staff meeting” Lucas said

Lucas pulled his car up in front of Haley’s House. Haley got out.

“Thanks again Luke, Call me later Eugene” Haley said

“Nobody here is Named Eugene” Lucas Replied

Haley laughed “There sure is, Luke” Haley said

“It was really no problem Hales, and Maybe I will call you, But the Eugene has to stop” Lucas said

“Never” Haley said closing the door and running up into her house. Lucas drove away.


Haley walked in her front door, kicked off her running shoes and was about to head upstairs when she saw Nathan Scott sitting in her living room. Taylor’s next victim was him. Nathan looked over to she Haley standing there. Nathan had no idea who this girl was. But, suddenly he was very interested.

“Hey I’m Nathan why are you all wet?” Nathan said still sitting on the couch

“I know who you are. Because I had to walk home” Haley said in utter disgust

“That sucks! If you know who I am shouldn’t I know who you are?” Nathan asked trying to use his charm

“I am” Haley said moving closer to him. Nathan got excited “going up stairs” Haley said as she turned to the stairs and started to head up them.

“Come on? Do you go to Tree Hill High?” Nathan asked

Haley stopped on the stairs “Nathan, I’ve been at the same school as you since first grade” Haley said

“Really? Why does it feel like we have never met?” Nathan asked

“OH I don’t know maybe our social status?” Haley said, then finish going up the stair and into her room and slamming the door.


Taylor finally came back to the living room to see Nathan sitting there not smiling. Taylor always had guys smiling, why wasn’t he? Taylor walked over. Nathan didn’t even look up. Taylor was very confused, what had happened while she had been in the bathroom.

“What’s wrong?” Taylor asked

“Oh nothing, it’s just” Nathan said

“Just what?” Taylor asked again

“A girl came in your house” Nathan said

Taylor looked over at the clock it was probably Haley.

“Was she short, brown hair?” Taylor asked

“Ya” Nathan said

“That’s my sister. Did she bother you?” Taylor asked

“Nope” Nathan said

“Then why are you not smiling?” Taylor said shifting closer to Nathan

“I asked her if she went to Tree Hill High, she said that I have been going to the same school as her since the first grade, but I don’t remember her” Nathan explain

“Nathan, don’t worry about her. She’s weird, now where were we” Taylor said moving right beside Nathan and Taylor went in to kiss him. For a second Nathan kissed her back, and then he pulled away.

“Taylor Who is she?” He asked

“She my sister, I already told you that silly” she replied

“I mean what’s her name?” He asked

“Why are you asking about my sister, I though you came over to be with me?” Taylor said

“I did but, it’s bothering me. That I don’t know her name” Nathan said

“Nathan, she isn’t important, anyways Junior. I am giving you a reputation by dating you because I am a senior. So I’m going to let you go home and think about it. Call me later” Taylor said basically pushing Nathan out the door.

“Taylor come on you can’t be serious, just because I asked a simple question?” Nathan said outside

“Yes, now go home” Taylor said slamming the door in his face


Taylor ran upstairs and ran into Haley’s room.

“Thanks a lot” Taylor said

“What?” Haley asked

“You just made Nathan spend 20 minutes asking about you” Taylor said

“Really?” Haley said

“Yes, and your never to talk to him again” Taylor said

“What was I going to do when he asked me who I was?” Haley asked

“You should have ran up stairs like a shy little girl” Taylor said

“Well I guess next time you should remember that you made me walk home in the rain this whole problem could have been avoided if you had driven me home” Haley said

“Do you two have to bicker all the time?” Quinn asked walking into Haley’s room

“Quinn, your Home!” Haley said smiling

“Of course its reading week, I wanted to come see my sisters’. Good thing I did. What are you two Bickering about this time?” Quinn asked

Taylor started to talk first “Well I had a guy over, and Haley started talking to him. Then all he wanted to talk about was Haley, yet he didn’t even know her name” Taylor said

“Okay and Haley your side” Quinn said

“Well I had to tutor after school, and Taylor had promised mom to drive me home. But knowing Taylor she met a guy and brought him home. So I was stuck walking home in the pouring rain. Luckily, Lucas was on his way home, and saw me and gave me a lifted. So, I came in kicked off my shoes and was about to head upstairs. When Nathan Scott, said Hey and introduced him self and asked who I was I basically told him I wasn’t interested and headed up stairs. Then he asked me if I went to school with him. I was like yes. Then I ran into my room” Haley explained.

“So Basically, Taylor you’re the one at fault, and Haley next time just tell the boy your name” Quinn said. Taylor got pissed off and left the room

“So Haley-Bop, I Missed you” Quinn said hugging Haley

“I missed you too” Haley said

“So any boys in your life?” Quinn asked

“You should be asking Taylor that not me” Haley said

“Your time will come little one, when you see a guy and can’t get him out of your mind that is the guy for you, How’s Lucas?” Quinn said

Haley though about how Nathan was still on her mind, she quickly disregarded that when Quinn said Lucas. Lucas absolutely hated Nathan. Well not really Nathan but Nathan’s Dad who is also Lucas Dad. That abandoned Lucas and His mother, for College.

“He is pretty good, he is on the basketball team now” Haley said

“That’s great” Quinn said


Later that night Haley was on the phone with Lucas

“Hey Hales” Lucas said

“Luke, I have something to tell you” Haley said

“What? Did Taylor get pregnant?” Lucas said

“No, it’s about who she is dating” Haley said

“Who is she dating?” Lucas said

“Nathan Scott, Luke. He was in my house. He was talking to me. I tried to ignore him. But it just fed his interest. Taylor ended up yelling at me because he was asking all these questions about me” Haley explained

“Haley James, do you really think I care that Nathan is dating Taylor. Now if he was to start following you around. I might. Haley I have to get over the fact that I’m related to him. Ok?” Lucas said

“Okay Luke, So did u do your homework yet?” Haley asked

“Are you my Mom now? And yes I did, you taught me well” Lucas replied

“I am not I just like to know these things” Haley said

“You’re going to be an amazing teacher someday” Lucas said

“Someday I basically tutor half the population” Haley said

Lucas Laughed. Somebody picked up the other line “Haley, some over people want to use the phone so GET OF” Taylor said

“Luke, sorry about that I should go, talk to you tomorrow” Haley said

She heard the phone click from the other room

“Okay, bye Haley” Lucas said hanging up the phone.


“TAYLOR, GOD DAMMIT CAN’T YOU LET ME HAVE 10 MINUTES ON THE PHONE” Haley yelled

“No I can’t Nathan is going to be calling to apologize any minute so no” Taylor said

Haley screamed then slammed her door. Taylor sat down on the couch and smirked.

The phone rang, Haley of course being pissed at Taylor picked up the phone before Taylor could. Quinn heard this whole thing and decided to distract Taylor


“Hello James residence” Haley said

“Hi, um, is Taylor there?” Nathan said Haley heart felt, she wonder if he was going to say anything about her

“She busy right this second but if you wait five minutes she should be free” Haley said

“Okay. What’s it like having Taylor as a sister?” Nathan asked

“Pretty crappy, she always mean to me, but I’m her little sister. It’s expected” Haley said she heard Nathan laugh. “You never told me your name do I get to know it now?” Nathan asked Haley.

Taylor ran upstairs into Haley’s room “Oh look who is here? I guess you will never no” Haley said handing the phone to Taylor

Taylor mouthed “You better sleep with one eye open tonight”


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Well, I've done alot of things before
Ex. Twitter, Myspace, Facebook, Fanfiction and so on
But I have never Blogged before

Soo..... moving right along

to todays topic

ONE TREE HILL

Did anyone see Monday's Episode? New favorite Episode!
Taylor and David seriously! like i didn't see that coming
Love how Haley's Families like all in it now, maybe Vivian will come or on of her brothers????

Next weeks episode looks so good, can't wait to see it! HATE TAYLOR.....
"Good morning Slut!" LOL

Anyways, I'm Tutor Girl, or that's what I'm calling my blog (its a nickname, I swear, my friend called me that and then the next episode of Oth, Brooke called Haley Tutor Girl, okay maybe like before i watched OTH which i year ago i didn't but now i do